ON IMPRISONMENT AND WHITMAN'S POEMS:
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Read the surrounding parts of the excerpts
given here about prisoners from the 1855 version of "Song of Myself." In
what other ways does the speaker advocate liberation? Compare the
passages on prisoners to the passages about other "problematic" citizens
of his United States-- drunkards, prostitutes, corrupt politicians-- and
think about how he proposes to integrate them into his utopian vision of
the Union. Or: compare the way he discusses liberating prisoners with the
way he discusses freeing the
runaway slave.
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Read the whole of "The Sleepers" (in different
editions, if you wish). Departing from the two excerpts from the beginning
and end of the poem given here, think about what happens in the course
of the poem to bring about the change in attitude. Do you read this poem
as an internal monologue, or are there other voices and conflicting visions
that must be resolved? Is the "resolution," in your reading, a successful
one?
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Read some reviews
of Whitman's war poetry, and critique the critics. Refer back to some
of the specific poems from Drum-Taps they mention, and establish
your own interpretation.
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Read the postwar poem, "The
Singer in the Prison." What is its attitude toward imprisonment and
prisoners? In what ways is that attitude more conventional than the ones
demonstrated in the earlier poems, and what do you make of the change?
Stylistically, how is the interpellated song (the hymn the female singer
performs) "like" or "unlike" other Whitman poems? Given that he often referred
to Leaves as his "song," do you sense any affinity between Whitman's
poetic self and the singer here? What would that suggest about his relationship
to his audience?
ON IMPRISONMENT AND DICKINSON'S POEMS:
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Read the various scholarly assessments
provided of "They shut me up in Prose." On what
points do these readings differ? Are there disagreements about the most
significant meaning of each individual word, or does it seem that each
critic is simply putting a different "spin" on it? Can you detect the vision
of Dickinson-- the person and the poet-- that the critic is trying to create?
Now turn your attention to the poem itself, and particularly to the most
ambiguous and problematic parts: what does "still" mean; what roles to
"they" and "himself" play; what does "easy as a Star" mean? After creating
this reading, is "your Dickinson" different from the critics'?
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Using the manuscript facsimiles provided,
make your own "edition" of one of the poems here. Pay attention to punctuation,
and to the stress on individual lines and words. How does Dickinson use
the physical space of the page? Does her use of space suggest anything
to you about the content of that particular poem?
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Read the versions of "A
prison gets to be a friend." Does the rest of the poem support the
little homily with which it begins? What do you make of some of the cryptic
references in the middle stanzas-- the "Planks," "plashing in the Pools,"
the "demurer Circuit," the "Cheek of Liberty"?
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In "Dying! To be afraid
of thee," Dickinson sets up an analogy between stricken soldiers together
in a battle and the progress of love. Whitman, too, spoke of fighting and
comradely love (Dickinson says "Friend," then "Love"-- an interesting move
to discuss in itself) together in his war writings. How do the two treatments
differ?
ON IMPRISONMENT AND NINETEENTH-CENTURY LITERATURE AND CULTURE IN THE U.S.:
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Research other, more conventional writers
of the period who wrote about captivity (think of the religious aspect
as well as concrete historical influences like slavery). How broadly do
they encourage us to think about the meaning of liberty and human freedom?
Compare to one of the Whitman or Dickinson poems here.
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Using the bibliography
and links provided here, research other poems from the Civil War period
from lesser-known writers. Are there common images, phrases, or stylistic
"moves" among these poems? Is the voice of the speaker like or unlike that
in a given Whitman or Dickinson poem? Does it claim direct contact with
the experiences described, or does it render those experiences abstract--
and if so, why? You might look at the
site on Civil War elegy for ideas about fitting some of these
works into a longer generic tradition.
EXPANDING TO OTHER TOPICS:
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Follow one of the historiographical controversies
about the War mentioned here: for instance, the debate over whether Grant
was right to end the prisoner exchanges; whether Northern or Southern prison
camps were maliciously administered; or the divisive Wirz trial. Think
about the way that these events require interpretation as well as
the dissemination of factual information, and what passions and values
one might bring to such interpretation. How are the interpretive processes
we bring to history similar to the process of analyzing the "story" of
a writer's life, or the "meaning" of a poem? (You might want to refer to
some of the competing critical statements about the Whitman and Dickinson
poems provided above.)
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Research the 20th-century
poetry of testimony, which is often impelled by a traumatic experience
of war or unjust imprisonment. Where do you "see" the trauma of such large
historical events leaving its trace on these writings? In light of later
poets, how "modern" do 19th-century texts about the traumas of the Civil
War seem?
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Research prison literature, from Boethius
to Malcolm X, and think about how these writers weave the experience of
incarceration into their work. Or look at some of the on-line 'zines and
other productions of contemporary prisoners. Consider style as well
as content: does language become as bare and stripped-down as a jail cell?
Or does the imagination become florid, multiplying to fill up the empty
space? How does prison concentrate (or break) the speaker or narrator's
sense of self?
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